Any suggestions as to what should happen next? Planning on /a/ to use Geass at some point, /co/ will show up eventually

also, how does I panel right?

Oh wow this is hilarious. Way to put a shit-eating grin on my face.

/b/ brings Nigras to the table (the Habbo kind) and a bunch of meme faces, maybe furries. Everyone is getting owned or something.

And then the next page it's /co/ overlooking everything, like he's the goddamn Batman or something.

Uh, then the respective forces keep fighting and /a/ is standing in the middle of everything looking down at his feet. And then /a/ flips out, beats everybody down (as a magical girl), and the post count is approaching the GET target!

And the end is underwhelming as it's a stupid get. Everyone's got their disappoint face on, and then the fight immediately breaks off and everyone who is involved is sitting on a couch in front of the TV, maybe playing some videogames. /a/'s arms are crossed and then he goes "I hate you all"

re: paneling: http://lilrivkah.livejournal.com/168859.html might help.

It's actually a pretty intuitive flow right now. I'm reading top-to-bottom, and if I come to a lengthwise panel broken up into several parts, I read each of those parts right-to-left. If one of the left-to-right panels are broken up into smaller bits, I'll read them top-down.

The real panel flow issue is like in page 1 panel 4... it's obvious the top-left is panel 4, but does it go right, or down? It's easy to tell the order because of the content, but only once you've read all four panels.

Maybe have the "OH GOD.." and "SHIT SHIT" panels be one panel? Panels 12 and 13 could be merged also, and panel 11 floating above it (since they are taking place at the same time). There's nothing in 13, either (unless it's a placeholder).

The next two pages are good (because they are not crowded), and maybe have the "i hate you /a/" panel be under the "/b/ troll" panel. Make the "NO" a bit taller to have it fit in.

Uh, basically, the less panels there are, the easier it is to understand what follows what. Don't be afraid of taking up more pages, as my math teacher in middle school used to tell me "paper is cheap, show all your work"

Holy shit, sir. That looks downright epic. Very well done so far.
No idea if I'm gonna be of any help working on a continuance of it though.

I got some more pages done. I do this all at work, no references etc. There are still blank spots and just makin it up as I go.

>>/b/ brings Nigras to the table (the Habbo kind) and a bunch of meme faces, maybe furries. Everyone is getting owned or something.

Will do.

>>And then the next page it's /co/ overlooking everything, like he's the goddamn Batman or something.
oops...
I'll have him pop up again.

>>Uh, then the respective forces keep fighting and /a/ is standing in the middle of everything looking down at his feet. And then /a/ flips out, beats everybody down (as a magical girl), and the post count is approaching the GET target!

I had something close to this in mind. /a/ is going to rule 63 himself.

>>And the end is underwhelming as it's a stupid get. Everyone's got their disappoint face on, and then the fight immediately breaks off and everyone who is involved is sitting on a couch in front of the TV, maybe playing some videogames. /a/'s arms are crossed and then he goes "I hate you all"

Just as planned.

Couldn't decide if it should be a mod GET or someone unexpected and not involved just popping in like "SUP GUIS"

I can't mech. Someone fix this.

The /u/ twins are just an excuse to draw boobs. /cm/ because I never see him anywhere.

The bald guy...I dunno who that should be. who else trolls /a/? /sp/?

missing blank spots for mech owning shit.

I CAN'T MECH. OR HANDS. HUUURRR

>The bald guy
/y/? He hates girls, but apparently loves busting down doors.

Actually, /u/ kind of fits, pic related. (/u/ is one over from /v/)

>>75
Oh shit, yea it is. /y/ works as well.

>>74
Please finish this.

are the first 4 pics related to the last 5 pics?

>>75
is unrelated.